“This How Much…”? Is this some sort of Pidgin English?
To add a “to” or not to add a “to,” that is the question.
Shouldn’t it be “A therapy class for children and their mothers…”? Wording it as above makes it sound like war and the children’s mothers are the causes of the children’s problems.
Either the “after” before the “for” or the “for” after the “after” should have been removed.
It should either be “victim was” or “victims were.” Based on the start of the story, apparently the former.
Zero percent chance of T-storms on Saturday? Couldn’t most days be decorated with that graphic?
Since when is “But” spelled “Derrière”?
The initial article on this subject, "What the World Needs Now is More Proofreaders and Editors: Sloppiness Reveals Disrespect", is here.